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Starring

:iconoiichyo: as Rainier

:iconshihouka: as Chyo

:iconspriteocarina: as Entropy & Shayla

(I LOVE ALL YOU GUYS SO MUCH. YOU ARE AMAZING VOICE ACTORS AND FRIENDS ; V ; <3333333 )

THUS I'M FINALLY DONE!

I wanted to try something diff this time and create a hybrid of a flash comic and a flash animation. Then this was born!

Hope you guys enjoy it and sorry if the animation gets kinda cheap at some point, I was really running out of time with this OTL

I hope I didn't ruin Shayla's character *tehKawesome! ; A ;

I'll try and work on adding 'back' buttons and subtitles to this sometime...;;;


UBF 10-681 Rainier [link] :iconmiunuu:
UBF 10-188 Shayla [link] :icontehkawesome:
UBF 10-486 Entropy [link] :iconcheshire-kun:
UBF 10-024 Chyo [link] :iconoiichyo:
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:iconholicyami:
holicyami Featured By Owner Mar 17, 2011
CREATIVE AND FUN : D
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:iconarcticsage-zaiphod:
Arcticsage-Zaiphod Featured By Owner Mar 15, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
that's a nice combination of a great comic and animation I should try that in the future...
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:iconmrkeritz:
MrKeritz Featured By Owner Nov 2, 2010
*jealousoftheartskillzandtheoverallaweomseness*
Wish as I was talented as you guys. xD
You kinda make me wanna think up my own Pokemon character. o_o
And I haven't been a huge pokemon fan in YEARS. (*is21yearsoldnow*)
But it's all coming back to me. Maybe it's just like riding a bike.
Keep up the awesome work. :]
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:iconjedi-raal:
Jedi-Raal Featured By Owner Oct 6, 2010
'so theres 20 minutes...'
nice.
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:icontuxedominimask:
TuxedoMiniMask Featured By Owner Sep 26, 2010
This is a really unique way to represent your story. Half comic, half animation. Very cool! :)
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:iconmiunuu:
miunuu Featured By Owner Sep 26, 2010
Haha thank you!
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:iconthatbrilliantsmile:
thatbrilliantsmile Featured By Owner Sep 22, 2010
That was awesome. Amazing work. :D
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:iconcybermisadventures:
CyberMisadventures Featured By Owner Sep 22, 2010
This is so creative. I love it!
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:iconmiunuu:
miunuu Featured By Owner Sep 22, 2010
Thanks so much! ' v '
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:iconpokemon817:
pokemon817 Featured By Owner Sep 18, 2010
is rainer a boy or a girl they say he but its wearing a dress............... ow my headhurts but i dont care this is still way awesome
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:iconmiunuu:
miunuu Featured By Owner Sep 18, 2010
Haha he's a boy, he's just very effeminate ' v '
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pokemon817 Featured By Owner Sep 21, 2010
thank u i seriosly did have a headache from that and me and my friends stayed up really late talking about it long story short they fell a sleep peacefully i had a headache and couldnt sleep wasent to bad though cuase i got to work on my drawings to put up on devaint art as soon as i learn how[link]
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SaintJoanofTheRoses Featured By Owner Sep 17, 2010
Wow, this is really cool!!

Only for the longest time I thought Rainier was a girl... ._.
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:iconmiunuu:
miunuu Featured By Owner Sep 17, 2010
lmao oh that's quite normal /patpat He's just quite the little fag.
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SaintJoanofTheRoses Featured By Owner Sep 17, 2010
^^; I see...
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:iconshizuka-amaya:
Shizuka-Amaya Featured By Owner Sep 16, 2010
Wow, that was amazing! You switch between the animation and manga very well ^^ I love it
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:iconmiunuu:
miunuu Featured By Owner Sep 16, 2010
Thanks so much! Glad you enjoyed it ' v '
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:iconstrawberry-girl-hero:
strawberry-girl-hero Featured By Owner Sep 16, 2010  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
... Sugoi desu yo nee!!!!
[English]
... that was so AMAZING!!
i want to go sparkle nowz! lol
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:iconpekou:
pekou Featured By Owner Sep 16, 2010  Hobbyist
AHHH OMG THAT WAS SO AWESOME MIUUU! ; A ; I FINALLY GOT IT TO WORK ON THESE STUPID COMPUTERS AT SCHOOL AND AUUUGHHHHH!!! It was so cool ; v ; I loved the animation and comics between each other!! it was such an awesome effect you did!! > V < all the voices were awesome, I lol'd at Chyo XDD (and I guess I was totally saying her name from if it's Chyo and not Chee-o LOOOOL ;;;;;
ffff I'm actually thinking of doing an animation next for Round 5 ; v ; I used to be an animator before I actually started drawing seriously haha. OTL OTL OTL

fff ; v ; but yeah, this is win :heart: amazing job you did, Miu! be very proud of yourself!! XD
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:iconmiunuu:
miunuu Featured By Owner Sep 16, 2010
Ahh thanks man I'm glad you liked it ; V ; <333 Yeah we were ttly hassling Jenn about how to pronounce Chyo's name correctly fff
Oh god DO IT. I'd love to see an animation by youuuu ; A ;
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:iconpekou:
pekou Featured By Owner Sep 16, 2010  Hobbyist
LOL I'll try ; v ;
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:iconstewpified:
Stewpified Featured By Owner Sep 15, 2010
Man, I need to to learn how to do stuff like this!

The tapping thing was genius <3
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:iconmiunuu:
miunuu Featured By Owner Sep 15, 2010
Haha thank you! <3
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:iconnirial:
nirial Featured By Owner Sep 15, 2010
I had to right click and use that to start it at the begining. Ya might wanna fix that...
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:iconmiunuu:
miunuu Featured By Owner Sep 15, 2010
It's not happening for anyone else :\ Are you just getting a black screen or the loading page with no play button?
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:iconnirial:
nirial Featured By Owner Sep 15, 2010
IM getting the beach ball with the word play. I have clicked on the beachball, on the word. I had to manually start it instead of just clicking play. i read on an earlier comment they had the same thing

And by the way I did end up watching it and it was really good. Needs work on the voice acting a tad though....
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:iconmiunuu:
miunuu Featured By Owner Sep 15, 2010
Hmm that's kind of odd..maybe a browser issue? I'm not sure what else to tell you :\ If it comes up again then I'll see if I can't figure out the problem, but I'm glad you did get to see it in the end!
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:iconnirial:
nirial Featured By Owner Sep 16, 2010
Maybe.
Im using Chrome so you might want to check that...
=)
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:iconsp85:
SP85 Featured By Owner Sep 17, 2010   Digital Artist
I'm using Chrome, and it played fine for me ^^
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:iconnirial:
nirial Featured By Owner Sep 18, 2010
I said- i dont know.
It might just be the fact that i got behind on my updates.
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:iconsp85:
SP85 Featured By Owner Sep 19, 2010   Digital Artist
:shrug: Could be. Or could be just a glitch, they do happen ;)
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Merei-the-Dark-One Featured By Owner Sep 15, 2010  Hobbyist General Artist
Wow, nice! =D Love the mix between flash animation and comics!
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Durgal Featured By Owner Sep 15, 2010
Nice! I like the mix of animation and comic. ;)
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:iconnero1209:
nero1209 Featured By Owner Sep 15, 2010  Hobbyist Writer
wow this is cool
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:iconchrono-king:
Chrono-King Featured By Owner Sep 15, 2010
epic
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:iconpekou:
pekou Featured By Owner Sep 15, 2010  Hobbyist
I can't see it right now since school computers are effed up, but I look forward to watching it! ;A ;
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:iconmiunuu:
miunuu Featured By Owner Sep 15, 2010
Haha message when you doooo <3
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tribute27 Featured By Owner Sep 15, 2010
Hey there, I was just looking through my mssages and saw this in my inbox (because I watch Flanimate). I never usually check out the vids but this one caught my eye. :D

Your art (esp. in the comic) is nice and clean, and I love the precise lines.

I felt that much of the dialogue could be scripted out and replaced by action, or sufficient body language. Let the audience figure out what is happening, then it's your duty to make your comic/flash flow clearly and cleanly.

I know that it's a Pokemon battle, and trainers have to dish out commands. Imo, I think what makes the best entry is when participants focus on the character development instead of the pokemon battle. You had a lot of character interaction at the beginning, which is good, it could've been better if it were 'shown not told'. It's a hard task, but it brings so much more to the plate.

I also suggest making your comics colored to match the Flash clip (or make the Flash clip greyscale to match the comic)--it just keeps things consistent.

But I do love the animated text "sfx"-- what a great idea! Just don't put too much in one page, because it distracts from the comic itself.

That's my long two cents (I've never written such a long review before). And if I come off as arrogant, I do apologize--it's hard to articulte the proper emotion through the internet--but I assure you that I only want to see the best progress from you.

I wish you luck in your ventures! :)
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:iconmiunuu:
miunuu Featured By Owner Sep 15, 2010
Woo this is a long one! Good god, I'm gonna try and hit all the topics you mentioned but if I miss some I hope you can forgive me;;;

One thing I should definitely mention now is that the majority of the flashes I complete and submit are done on a deadline that I tend fail to pay attention to and thus I fail to give myself enough time to create something incredible worthwhile.

As I mentioned in my artist's comments, there are stale scenes (MANY) stale scenes in this submission, as my deadline for this contest sorta caught up with me.

The color comic suggestion I wholeheartedly agree with you on, but once again, I was on a deadline that didn't allow me the time to do such things. The SFX animation bulkening up the page did worry me a bit too, I did try to downplay it in some scenes or just make the words small, but then it would fail to have the effect I wanted. It's hard to notice, but even popular manga/comics have these SFX CLUTTERED on their pages. Just a matter of placing I suppose, but then again, this was my first time doing something like this so I can only learn by doing!

Thanks again for you 2 cents! It's very much appreciated man really! ' v ' b
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:iconlonewolfd:
LonewolfD Featured By Owner Sep 15, 2010
Awesome.
Good luck with round 4!
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:icondike-kun:
Dike-kun Featured By Owner Sep 15, 2010
Amazing work *___*
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:iconmiunuu:
miunuu Featured By Owner Sep 15, 2010
Haha thanks man ; v ; <3
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:icondike-kun:
Dike-kun Featured By Owner Sep 15, 2010
You're welcome ^^
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TheUnununium Featured By Owner Sep 15, 2010  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Wow, this was really cool. It was really worth watching and reading it. I really liked the plot and the idea about commanding the Pokemon with dancing. Geat job, I'll be rooting for you. Good luck for this round! <3
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:iconmiunuu:
miunuu Featured By Owner Sep 15, 2010
Thank you! I'm glad to hear you liked it and thanks so much for the support! ; v ; I hope I win too!
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:icontheunununium:
TheUnununium Featured By Owner Sep 15, 2010  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I just watched your opponents work again and I really have to say: This going to be a veeeeeeeery close one. However, I keep my fingers crossed for you. > <
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oiiChyo Featured By Owner Sep 14, 2010
I WAS TOO EXCITE WHEN I SAW THIS AND SPAZZING;; BUT I THINK I AM CALM DOWN ENOUGH TO COMMENT AHAHAH

LOVE THIS SO HARD TT V TT ) !!! AND YOU PULL'd ALLNIGHTERS RIGHT ? WORTH ITTTT; TURN OUT SO AMAZING !!! ... AGAIN;; I CANNOT. STOP. WATCHING/READING IT.

CHEERING YOU ON !!
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:iconmiunuu:
miunuu Featured By Owner Sep 14, 2010
LOOOL I DID THE SAME WITH YOUR ENTRYYYY I HAD TO CONTAIN MYSELF TO FINISH MY OWN.

PFFT THAT ALL NIGHTER TTLY FAILED SINCE I ENDED UP FALLING ASLEEP TIL I HAD 18 HRS LEFT TO FINISH THE NEXT DAY. /FAILURE

/CHEERING CHYO ON ; V ;
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oiiChyo Featured By Owner Sep 15, 2010
FFFFFF WELL NOW YOU CAN GET PLENTY SLEEEEP ; 0 ; ) !!!!
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cheshire-kun Featured By Owner Sep 14, 2010
FFFF MIU I LOVE THIS SO.FREAKIN.HARD!! ♥♥♥ THIS IS SO AMAZING DSKLAJDLSAJDSL I LOVE THE FLASH SEQUENCES & THE COMICS FFFFFFFFFFFFFF DJKSALJDSALJDAL U BETTER WIN THIS ROUND!! Q V Q ♥♥♥
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